Poem

Pain is just a mere thought
Makes a person feel thirtsy without a shere drought
I feel caught in a web of spiders and lies
Caught within myself turned over and body wrythes
And it is pain that destroys a persons brain
if they are weak enough to feel that shame
But what happens if it is not true
And believed by anothers virtue
And what happens if pain is nothingness
Like netflis buffering less
Or stating fact without someones bless
Or speaking words only apparent to ones sex
And thoughts are hurting a little bit less
But it is the pain of the body heard out through ones mess
Made up of things not worth shame
Now we are back to blame
Blamed for everything by those who can't shape their fame
Like their own reputation is nothing but the same
Type of thought and now we are back to the drought
That one goes through without any one knowing
So hard to show it feels better to just keep choking
Cause these don't keep showing
Because is nothing than weird sort of guy
It can be nice or can be sligh
Or shigh and you have to look to the sky
To see God is listening and this pain you don't know why
So we must sit here and trust
Cause every hard thing rusts
Then we brake away and know that everything will be ok

Comments

  1. EvanJ's English1 Blog2March 27, 2018 at 9:00 AM

    This is a well done poem. You utilize End Rhyme and Metaphors to bring up real ideas and problems such as pain and blame. I appreciate the way you can equate two entirely different things in such a manner as to make the reader think that those to different things belong together. It would be nice if you considered writing a short explanation of what inspired you to write this after the poem. As a whole, it is a great poem.

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